Introduction to Critical thinking piece

I picked my Identity DB posting "Survival of the fittest...or rather the most popular or accepted..." for my critical thinking piece because I think it really showed a connection between two writers, even though they were writing in completely different perspectives. My Example of this is "..both authors had were speaking about lunchtime and the loneliness felt during it. With White, she was writing as a spectator speaking of the overweight girl, eating alone and trying to ignore the teasing from the boys. Whereas Grealy wrote about her own experience of being teased by the group of boys until ultimately having lunch by herself in her counselors office." I think I was able to show analysis (See in detail and connect it with other things). This is one of my first posts, so it doesn't show the growth of my writing, but I feel it was a great start.